Well done Jordan a thorough and interesting explanation of your target audience, to include demographic, life style, dress code etc.To improve you could revise the following:Spelling mistakes...copy and paste onto word to spot them.Lose "I believe" for ever!!! Do not include this phrase in any posts or essays..ever. It lacks sophistication and is not part of academia!!!At present proficient - strong Level 3.
Jordan - There's no sign of your Evaluation Q2 draft. The deadline was yesterday so I won't be able to give you feedback on a draft. I hope work on the Evaluation is progressing well.
Your audience research reflects enthusiasm and engagement with the media interests, dress code and and prevailing attitude of the demographic. Also reflecting confident understanding of the genre.Profile of target audience excellently completed.
Well done Jordan a thorough and interesting explanation of your target audience, to include demographic, life style, dress code etc.
ReplyDeleteTo improve you could revise the following:
Spelling mistakes...copy and paste onto word to spot them.
Lose "I believe" for ever!!! Do not include this phrase in any posts or essays..ever. It lacks sophistication and is not part of academia!!!
At present proficient - strong Level 3.
Jordan - There's no sign of your Evaluation Q2 draft. The deadline was yesterday so I won't be able to give you feedback on a draft.
ReplyDeleteI hope work on the Evaluation is progressing well.
Your audience research reflects enthusiasm and engagement with the media interests, dress code and and prevailing attitude of the demographic.
ReplyDeleteAlso reflecting confident understanding of the genre.
Profile of target audience excellently completed.